Challenge 40: Fairy Tale Character

[IsabellaRose]

THE CHALLENGE

• Write something that involves as an important character or figure from a well-known fairy tale. It can be any character, any version of them (including your own take on them), from or in any culture, in any setting or time period... the only rule is that it must be a recognizable character from a well-known fairy tale.

Deadline

• Midnight (EST) , 21 Jun 2025

Limits

• 1 entry per person
• no strict word limit, but please try to keep it around 2,000 words- remember, everyone has to read these to vote

Prizes

• 1st Place: 4,000 EcchiCredits
• 2nd Place: 2,000 EcchiCredits
• 3rd Place: 1,000 EcchiCredits

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Spoiler

It was the morning of her and her brother's 21st birthday. Gretel let out a sigh had she pulled the dress over her head. It easily falling over her trim body. Had it really been 10 years since the two of them escaped the evil witch and her house of temptations. Since her parents told them to go into the woods because they can't afford to feed them. Leaving her room she hummed a little time to herself and started making breakfast. Why was she thinking of that place today, she wondered.

Chopping wood out side near the forest Hansel's strong muscular arms easily broke the log into pieces. Gathering his work he went into the house to deposit the logs for a fire. It was the middle of summer but there was a chill in the air. As he entered the house he looked back into the woods. Was something calling him? "Morning Han." His sister greeted him smiling her normal sunny personality showing through. Sitting down at breakfast he started eating. His thoughts lost in the woods. The woods they hadn't gone near them since that day but today he felt them. Like something was calling him.

Annoyed at her brother's silence. He had grown quite these last few days. Almost like he was lost in his thoughts. Not something he was known for. Hansel preferred action to words. "Well happy birthday day bro. I hope you like the birthday pancakes." Frustration building at him and his silence. "Well yeah big lug answer me." She shouted breaking him from his revelry. "What why are you hassling me." He responded his irritation growing. "I do something nice for our birthday even though we don't have much and you just ignore me these past few weeks." He own frustration spilling forth. "I don't owe you anything." He responds getting up from the table he stalks out of the house and into the woods. Frustrated at his words he gets lost in his thoughts.

"Hansel wait." She shouts after him. Not the woods why would he go in there. Screwing up her courage she chases after him. In the woods Hansel was busy berating himself. He owed Gretel everything, she was his guide, his friend, she saved him from his own selfish desires from that house. That house why was he thinking about that after all these years. Stopping in a clearing he looks up. "Hansel where are you." She shouted going deeper into the forest. Why here why now? She had a bad feeling about all this. Then she spied him standing in a clearing. His clothes clinging to his muscular frame. Sweat beading on his arms. His tight perfect ass she could take a bite out of. Shaking her head she approached her brother. Where were these thoughts coming from she wonder hesitantly tapping his shoulder. 

Turning around he saw her. His beautiful Gretel. Her long hair falling down her shapely body. Her simple dress clinging to her body and her perfect little tits. Her nipples poking through the fabric. What am I thinking? He shakes his head to try and clear the thoughts. Pointing into the clearing all he can say is "it's back." Following his arm she looks away from Hansel and sees it for the first time the cottage but it is different this time no candy in sight. "Maybe it's a different place let's go." Striding forward she examines what looks like an ordinary house but they can't see inside. "Look at the door it doesn't have a handle but more like a hole for a big key." Gretel points out. Kneeling down by the hole, "It looks like..." looking down at her own crotch. "A pussy but then the key would be a..." unable to say the word. "A cock." Hansel finishes the word for her. Following his instincts he drops his pants. His cock already starting to get hard. Gretel blushes this wasn't the first time she had seen him naked she used to bath with him when they were younger and there was that one time when he thought she was not at home. Grabbing his cock she guides him towards the hole. Feeling it growing in her hand she shoved it in. With a groan Hansel enters the living door. He starts thrusting his hips against it. His sister holding his hips and helping he can feel the climax growing. With a grunt he unloads his sperm into the hole and with a click the door opens.

As they step inside the cottage they gasp. Strange devices fill the room. Cages, cylinders of all shapes and sizes, tubes connected to strange machines, and in the center was the witch. Not the old woman of their childhood, who at first appeared kind and grandmotherly then old and evil. No a young attractive woman in the prime of her life. Her large shapely breasts hung free of any restraints. Her tight hourglass figure followed by long attractive legs. Her carefully trimmed bush sitting on top of a pair drooling pussy lips. "Welcome back my pretties. I knew you couldn't stay away." She moved towards Hansel. Pushing Gretel aside she grabs his already stiffening member. With a wave of her hand she closes the door and gestures Hansel towards her tit. A little milk drips out. He greedily begins to suckle.

No not again thinks Gretel she entrapped us again with our us even realizing. She looks over at Hansel who is drinking from the witches tit. Felling her breast through her dress. A feeling she couldn't describe welled up in her. "Hansel get away from her." She tries separating the two but no luck. With a gasp Hansel unlatches from her nipple. His body gets hot and with a groan his cock grows doubling in size his eyes glaze over. "There's my big boy." The witch purrs. "Let's tie little ol Gretel up." With a grunt of agreement Hansel turns to his sister. Ripping her dress off he pushes her towards a chair and ties her up. "Now come over here and let me taste your big member." The witch coos from a bed. Hansel moves towards her. Precum dripping from his new enlarged cock. "Now fuck me. Fill me and only me with your seed." The witch let's out a husky groan as he enters. All the while locking eyes with Gretel. 

Gretel doesn't know how long she spent trapped in the chair watching her brother fill that whore's pussy. Cumming inside every hole she had. As the jealousy in her builds she lets out a sob. Crying she realized she didn't just lust after Hansel. She didn't just want him to do to her what he was doing to the witch. She never wanted him to do that with anyone else.

"Yes fill my ass with your cum." The witch screamed in pleasure. Juice squirting from her fingers playing with her clit. They collapsed on the bed. "Oh look my toy is crying." The witch let's out a giggle. "Does she want a taste?" Gretel just merely nods. Unable to form words. "Hansel his perpetually hard cock swings as he moves towards her. Her eyes widen as he enters her mouth. His large cock gagging her as he starts thrusting. The ropes around her wrists loosen and she immediately grabs his tight ass pulling him deep. Gasping for air between the large thrusts. She can feel it building inside his cock. Desperate for his cum she pushes him deeper down her throat. With a shudder his cock erupts down her throat. Flooding her mouth and stomach with his cum. As he slides his cock out of her mouth she pulls him down. The two lock lips in a passionate embrace.

When the kiss ends Hansel's eyes no longer cloudy look at Gretel for the first time as a woman not just his caretaker, friend, or sister. Without speaking she motions over to a machine where the oven was. Pretending to still be under her sway Hansel moves towards the witch and pulls her over to it. "Oh you want to play with my device on your sister?" Her husky voice replies. "Let me show you how." She straddles the cock machine giving out a gasp as it enters both her holes. "Then the arms, legs, and torso get strapped in." She motions for Hansel to strap her in. "Now bring that arm and insert it in my mouth." As soon as it is in the witches mouth. Gretel springs up. Turning the device to maximum power the witch let's out a howl as the machine pounds every orifice she has. "Oh Hansel." Gretel, tears in her eyes let's out a sob."Hansel, I love you so much." She gasps as he picks her up and lays her down on the bed. With a thrust he penetrates her for the first time. "I love you two Gretel it will always be you." He responds each thrust intensifying their connection. "Yes cum in me." Gretel moans as the cottage around them disappears. Lost in there love oblivious to the world. With a final shudder Hansel's seed explodes out of him and into Gretel's fertile womb. "I will always love you Gretel." He whispers into her ear as sleep over takes him. "I know Hansel you are mine as much as I am yours and..." She rubs her belly. Knowing instinctively there are now twins growing inside of her. "They are ours."