Warning

Oh no, you misunderstand. I was talking about the Mitsuko post. I am sure Hellhound's post was fine. I went for a daring post for Mitsuko, not just any small talk story telling and this is what I am anxious about. Wondering if I went too far or off the rails with how I narrated things. But again, no rush. It's fun to read the thread. Just thought I'd say.

Sooo what is going on with Exzel and Zorn/Hellhound... I feel like I may have missed something. I'm also a bit nervous about if I did something good with Mitsuko or not. Being unsure is making me anxious. XD Though, I like that everyone is having fun sexy times. I'm just curious about if everything is alright on other sides. ><

I allowed my brain to write for me and I sorta put a kind of plan idea of what I wanted to do. (My brain was bugging me out to write this.) If anything is wrong and unfitting somehow, please tell me. I will probably fix some details when I feel like something's off but this is the main idea of what I wanted to do. Any opinions appreciated.

A little later, a sound could be heard in the room but Mitsuko was sleeping already from the energy she had spent during the day. It was the first time she had transformed for as long as she had and it caused her to sleep a lot. A small figure had "formed" inside the room, floating above the floor at first but soon descended to land quietly. This short figure with a blue theme of hair and eyes, also had strange animal ears and a tail. Unbeknown to Mitsuko, she had somehow magically appeared inside her room. Her eyes peered around quietly but stopped their gaze upon the sword apparel left on the desk. Stepping toward it, she put a hand toward it but a magic protection stopped her. A small look of annoyance showed on her face before she shifted her eyes to elsewhere in the room until she looked at the bed. Moving quietly still, she reached to it then stopped before she reached to the bump and simply pulled the sheet away, uncovering what, or rather, who she was looking for. A naked woman was sleeping there but soon woke up to the sudden cold she was feeling. It didn't take long before Mitsuko stared at the girl, wondering if she was dreaming. She had many questions at once too, but then suddenly covered herself as she was showing her entire nudity to the girl who had pulled the sheets away. The schoolgirl noticed the ears and felt worried instantly. Was she one of the demons who wanted to do things or whatever she was warned about? "W-who are you? L-leave my room!", Mitsuko ordered to the girl looking at her but not exactly staring at her body. The young girl reached to Mitsuko with her hand and grabbed her arm before glaring at her, not caring that it would uncover her. The hold onto her wrist was strangely strong, almost painful. "The sword... Give it back to me...", the girl spoke, commanding her. Mitsuko panicked a little, knowing that she meant the magic sword. What else could it be? "W-what? No. I'm not giving it to you.", Mitsuko replied, trying to pull her arm away. Who was this girl, to be as strong as she was...? The young looking one did not seem to take the answer well, frowning slightly. With unimaginable power, she soon stepped back but held Mitsuko still and swung her, pulling her out of bed by sheer strength, throwing her against the wall powerfully. The impact was brutal enough that the wall was taken out loudly by her body which continued its course outdoors. Mitsuko's scream of pain barely could be heard by the destruction. A hole was left in the bedroom with the girl being sure that she had killed this human effortlessly. The noise did well to alert everyone in the surrounding area as well. With that done, the young one turned her gaze to the sword but blinked as it was gone. Mitsuko had been thrown through a wall, from the second floor, to land in the yard completely naked... In the split second that she could still feel something, she was certain that she was dead. The pain from it all had been intense, nothing like anything she had ever felt before. But... She was alive... Somehow... Now, if she was capable to move, was another story. Her body was scratched, even bleeding from multiple areas, but nothing was broken by some miracle. Her dizziness was bad enough that no medicine would fix that quickly. She tried to push herself up but she felt horrible. This girl, whoever she was, could just come and finish her now. Some people around gathered, it was over... Yet... A warm light could be felt within her heart. It did not feel like death but rather relief. Or was it the same? A vision of the sword blurred her mind, telling her not to give up. Did the sword protect her? Surely, any other humans would have been annihilated by the attack... A magical girl would still be standing, probably. Mitsuko was new and unfit to fight a powerful enemy. In fact, she never had fought before. She was weak but she did not want to die just yet. The light felt warm again, telling her to hold onto this wish to survive. This hope. The schoolgirl closed her eyes, prayed and forced herself up. Somehow, she managed to stand back on her feet, unfortunately completely naked... In front of her, the sword was glowing strongly. This was her only hope. Reaching painfully to it, Mitsuko grabbed it and an intense light filled her with magic, triggering the transformation. In this case, it covered her body with her valkyrie armor, even healing her a little as well but it still left her wounded. It felt better, though. Her purple eyes looked at the house with a large hole. This young girl was staring down at her before she jumped to her level. "Escape!", a voice screamed in her mind. She grew into her magical form but it was not to fight this enemy. It was to give her the strength to live another day. Would this girl hurt anyone if she was left to be? Could Mitsuko really retreat? The girl was watching her. She wanted her dead, nothing else. Maybe the diamond sorceress's warning did not apply to this enemy. If Mitsuko fought now, she WOULD die. Wait... The convention. She would be safe there. Her mother was not at home yet. She would hopefully be fine, even if worried to death about her daughter. "W-who are you...?", Mitsuko asked, her pain being constant, noticeable in her voice. The girl had not drawn a weapon yet, did she not intend to fight? "I am Lenneth... What will you do?", she asked, looking serious and terrifying. She was not taunting her. The question had been simple. The answer also... Mitsuko felt so weak and powerless... So afraid as well. She had to retreat, already stepping back to do so. Lenneth did not look like she intended to stop her, simply observing. The schoolgirl was ashamed but without much choices, she ran away back toward the convention. The girl watched her leave before she looked around at everyone staring at her with fear. They were meaningless to her. Not a single one had magical powers. The alarms of emergency services could already be heard to come to her location but Lenneth could not bother staying there right now. The magic weapon she was after had slipped away, choosing a human girl in the process. The young girl would leave her be for now. Soon, she teleported away of their sight. Next Chapter in the Story... (Click here)

The funny thing is, I was more thinking of it happening right after she went to bed or so. So it would be not too much later where the convention is happening. Or whatever they are doing. Which makes me wonder if Mitsuko would find them in, um... heat. When and if she returned to the convention. Since there seemed to be a lot of pleasure going on back there. XD

Hmmm... Sorry to press this but my ADHD brain won't shut up and I was thinking... I may have writing ideas for Mitsuko that could push her to move elsewhere. So I wonder if it's okay if I write something up with Mitsuko and potentially Lenneth. Note that I'd probably moderate with her (As to not become the #1 threat. I wouldn't want making anyone uncomfortable.) But I may have some ideas that could make her go back to the convention. Although, that depends if it's okay. My brain is tickling me to write something and all things seem set for it.

I see! And yes, I understand Alexandrine's perspective better. It's true that she was very vulnerable, at least from a self perspective. Hellhound wouldn't have been able to put a scratch on her anyway since she was still sharp in battle. Fujiko didn't exactly get her in battle, hence the way she was caught off guard. It does make a lot of sense. Hellhound's thing is that I finally managed to put a part of her lewd side in. So that's kinda nice. But yeah, I don't even know for sure how Hellhound will react to when she sees her like however she'll be. It will depend on the situation. I generally adapt to what happens in real time and she will behave however she must when the time comes. I wonder, though. I may have an idea about Lenneth but it depends. I know I've set Mitsuko as a kind of Valkyrie and it wouldn't make sense to put two of them unless... What if Lenneth was after her? The sword might be one the gods or something, hence granting her her magic powers. Lenneth could have sensed her to come after her.

It's interesting how Alexandrine is like supposed to be strongest Magical girl around too but gets corrupted by a simple demon. I mean no judgement. I just think it's interesting. Unless I am wrong about her power level but with what Zorn said about her and all. In my case, I'm trying to get out of the zero activity hole but it's a bit complicated right now. I want to give Mitsuko more time (I notice she has not been active for like 8+ pages so far) but it probably would be more like a single path until she meet with someone else. That is, unless I make a third character in hope to fill empty spots. Still not sure what I want to do but I crave to do something. Hellhound is also in standby right now as well. ><

And both Zorn and Hellhound will be confused as to why the archenemy and the dog killer, in that order, will be on the side of the enemy. Also, with the amount of magical girls falling to the enemy, there won't be many staying on the good side. XD Mitsuko will have to save everyone. I didn't know yet but she's the protagonist.

Mao looked at the surrounding changing, wondering how it was possible to be connected to her mind unless this form of magic followed a still existing connection from the soul to the body. In this case, the catgirl would have no control over it as she didn't really have any power over the body or corpses. While this amazed her, she was not exactly surprised that Pelintira was capable of such mysterious feats. For now, she was looking around and noticed where they were or about. With nobody noticing them, they were free to watch but the vision was not completely clear yet. Only when the area shifted again, did it make a little more sense. Mao looked at the witch when she warned her that the girl could potentially notice them. Now was the time to see if the girl would recognize her soul captor. What the catgirl looked like right now, was the reaper with her scythe in hand. There was no doubt that she was noticeable if the girl saw them. Mao would fly to her and look at her, with her usual expression. While her weapon may scare one or two, she herself meant to be the only thing she knew since she died. Some of her memories may or not remember but Mao felt like she would end remembering quickly anyway. This was the connection that this catgirl had with her souls. She was their mistress once she gained possession of them. Mao had similar means to communicate with them but as she had made clear before, this was not the same method as her own. For the time being, Mao's weapon vanished and she landed on her paws but watched the girl quietly, observing how she would react in this dimension.

It's the fun part. I love writing LOT of characters. But I always look like I struggle left and right because I need to make sure I write them fairly. This is why I often ask questions about what sounds right or not. If I find the right vibe then I can use many characters without issues. It's even fun to see such characters interact with each others.

If I was to use her, I probably would not make her "unbeatably" powerful but she'd definitely be stronger than any humans. Her behavior also plays in the balance. (By example, someone who is OP and searches to destroy everything would just leave a wasteland.) But Lenneth is thankfully not Odin or Ragnarok. So she's fine on this side. She would probably be a little stronger than Alexandrine for sure. I know I saw versions of Lenneth that doesn't give her an absolute god mode. She is still fearsome. (Balancing this right is always the hardest part, isn't it?) But I think the most important question is if she'd be fun to have around. She can be used sexually but not sealed.

Hellhound didn't take too long before showing herself, as she poked her head out of covering. In any normal times, she could be a little more subtle but she was merely playing at this moment, probably out of boredom. She remained there, just looking at them for the moment. It was unsure if she was listening but she was watching. That energy of hers begged to be used, maybe the bath had overcharged her but she did not seem to complain about the aftereffects. If anything, she was ready for more rounds instead of afraid after losing.

I might still need to hear opinions about Lenneth. Like, if she would make a good character or not. The "where she comes from" might be a little weird since there's no god world of sort. Unless there is. But would a powerful loli be a good idea? Also, I imagine that if Lenneth was worshiped anyhow, it would be in older times. This version however is a "young" version with no real origins. Funny thing is, she has the same property has magical girls. I could develop her oddly natural, though. Innocent. (She'd still be an enemy of humanity or seen as.)

Hellhound only observed the two, feeling like they were now focused on each others. It was the perfect moment to sneak away and so, she slowly stepped away quietly. At first, she did like she was not doing anything but after a moment and a short distance, she flipped around and dashed away but didn't go very far, turning a corner and just stopping there out of sight. Hellhound just liked to move around, at least when she was not being lazy and sleepy. With her revival experience, she felt full with energy anyway. Besides, she had better things to do instead of watching two demons flirt with each others. She wanted to find some battle to fight and that needed her to leave this place first. But for now, she waited to see their reactions.

Previous Chapter in the Story... (Click here) Upon getting back home, Mitsuko entered quietly and left her shoes at the entrance before she headed to the bathroom for a shower, as she had intended. Before that, however, she went to her room so she could put her stuff down but more importantly, the sword that was so valuable to her now. As she was thinking back, Mitsuko wondered if it really had been a good idea to go to the convention transformed but at least nobody seemed to have noticed her except the magical girls she had met. For how long this meeting had been, she was happy she could find a start somewhere, even if she didn't understand everything well yet. At least everything seemed fine, now. For the time being, Mitsuko undressed and picked some pajamas, leaving herself in nothing but undergarments as she was alone in the house at this moment. Afterwards, she finally headed to the bathroom for her shower and readied the water, which was easily done with a few buttons. Even though she was alone, she couldn't shake a feeling off but maybe it was nothing. These last few days had been a little stressful with the transformation practices that she had to keep hidden and school on the other side with the homeworks she had to do. The convention itself helped her find magical girls like her but it didn't really show her what challenges she'd have to face later on. But for now, Mitsuko undressed completely and entered the shower, getting a feel of the water that was perfectly warm. This was stress-relieving but her thoughts were still on this whole magical girl situation. As she was finally naked by choice, she came to really think about what transforming was about. It did not entail transforming her body... No, it meant summoning the magical power that was now hers and this meant having her own magical uniform or armor. But... The process to gain such armor when she transformed was to destroy the clothes she was wearing beforehand. Thankfully, the power of the sword emitted a magic light when she transformed but still. Mitsuko unfortunately thought about what she was warned about and what it meant in the end. Would demons really want to force themselves on her? She could not possibly have meant that, right? She had no real experiences on that side and then there was a certain self-consciousness about her own body. She was not exactly a top class, so to speak, among other girl mates at her school. Looking down at herself, she was what some boys would consider 'flat', even. Sure, she had something but it wasn't anything to chant praise about. Feeling her own breasts for a moment, she pouted slightly. The girl suddenly blushed as she wondered why she was even thinking of that. Moving her hands away, she reached to her bottles of shower supplies in order to do what she should be doing: Washing herself. Mitsuko did it slowly, taking her time to enjoy it, until she'd rinse everything off and finally turn the shower off afterwards. At this moment, she'd pick a towel to dry herself and leave the bathroom as quickly as possible, only wanting to return to her bedroom to rest. With her mind being so occupied, though, she realized that she had forgotten her pajamas and a soft swear played in her mind. At this point, she knew that she should be more focused but at the same time, it wasn't so bad. She dropped the towel and simply headed to bed to rest.

I mean, here's the issue. I didn't really think about the worship part and being worshipped by demons seems a little odd. I like the idea of godly characters but I would not want to make anyone uncomfortable with it. (Feeling devalued by another character is not fun) If she has the power to get rid of Alexandrine, it would kinda turn the story pretty bad. Ironically, I don't think she is the kind to just "invade" a world and destroy it. She'd wait to be challenged, therefore keeping the power balance fair. A demon is far more invasive in nature. So I wonder how Zorn would know her. Or anyone, tbh. She is random enough that she wouldn't fear wandering in towns but she has little reasons to really do it. IF I was to use her, she is also possible to bring into lewd situations but she is really more "Battle" than "Sexual" so she wouldn't try to trigger it but someone might still be able to bring her into it. Buuut I still have many questions about how to make this work IF I went there. I would want to develop her somehow but this needs to be done the right way, not the wrong way.

I was thinking Lenneth. Now, hear me out, I have a very cute fan pic of a certain loli Lenneth and she is pretty cool. She is also a direct reference to SO3 Lenneth, which means she is 100% out there to fight humans. This girl needs more personality and development though, and I think it could be done. Plus, smol girl with big spear. What's not to like?

A part of me wanted to introduce a kind of god(dess) or something. I remember we spoke of threats being anything from demons to aliens so I wondered if the same could be applied with potential magic gods or the likes. Now, I understand that certain character might be too OP buuut this is always adjustable. I don't know how far this can go, though.

Hellhound smirked after he clarified. It's like he was giving her a quest or something, regarding finding more about Emi. She would admit that making a connection between her and Zorn had not exactly been a priority, let alone a thought. It would be something to think about later. Still, it appeared like Zorn had more to him than just what he showed. Some demons, especially females, had specialties that went beyond the scopes of magic and techniques. Some knew the art of lust and pleasure. Hellhound knew of succubus, particularly. There were male versions of them but the beast girl didn't exactly picture Zorn as one of them. He was more, to her, the typical demon lord making use of his power to dominate. This could mean sexually. Hellhound also grinned at the idea of the latter since she would admit to have needs at times and humans, females in preference, made the perfect toy to play with. Best when defeated as they were powerless to stop what was coming to them. The thought even made her blush slightly, with her tail suddenly wagging even. 'Play' had more than one meaning to her, for sure. Hellhound obviously did not aim for pregnancy with her antics as she was female herself and preferred to take over other females. No, it was a question of dominating, tasting, at times feeding on fluids, on other times sharing heat. Hellhound shook her head as she was letting intrusive thoughts take over her. "So you want me to find more about her, do you?"

Hellhound listened carefully, being confused a bit when Zorn mentioned the rabbit girl. But still... The fact she almost died on her first real battle was in the level of insulting. "Your old enemy was too powerful to get close to but I will get stronger. When I do, they won't see me coming. I just need to be faster, too.", she said with confidence, seeming pumped up and ready to fight more seriously. To this end, she would have to fight more humans and stronger opponents. For now, there remained the question of the rabbit girl. "Wait... You don't say...?", she grinned a bit, having a nefarious thought in mind as she continued playfully, "She is related to you, is that it...? ♪ Is a human related to you? But that would means...", she suddenly gasped.

Hellhound wandered some more, having no idea that she was being followed. At least, at first. She was still unaware that Zorn was even still around to begin with. If his scent lingered around somehow, she only thought it would be from being here at least once. There was a possibility that he was still in this place but she was not exactly worried about it. She had no reason to fear him as of that moment and while she could playfully avoid him this time, her mind was mostly on something else. Now that she had found magical girls, she wanted to become stronger. Hellhound was normally a forced to be reckoned but she had been defeated like she was a newbie. This annoyed her but this also motivated her to become stronger. As she was thinking this, she was standing in a hallway, thinking she was alone. A noise of sort attracted her attention, however. Her eyes shifted to look at what was growing closer and a small surprise could be seen on her face before she smiled devilishly. "You... You're still here and you're following Hellhound. I thought you were gone after I almost died.", she spoke playfully and did not even seem upset for any reasons. She was tougher than to complain about him not showing up and besides, she had some kind of plans now. "I don't think you came to say hi, right? ♪ What do you want...?", she spoke with the same tone as before, not really showing any hesitation or fear regarding him. She didn't really bow to demons, either.

Hellhound somehow managed to get a piece of meat for herself. Nothing too big, just enough to fulfill her stomach. She was not exactly a big eater, depending on her mood. Afterward, she would leave on her way and, strangely, she minded her manners a little for when it came to this home's traditions. It didn't stop her from playfully sneaking around in her own style when nobody looked. She did not really do much to hide after eating and probably would be found easily, just curiously exploring the place until she'd be in the mood to leave.

@SataiRolePlayingGuy Should I make Hellhound respond since you double posted searching for her or should I actually wait before I post?

Hellhound had found her way to that place, following the scent of food. It was not what she had expected but it worked just the same. Surely that piece of meat cooking over the fire was not put there for her but she was so hungry that it did not matter to her. Still, she was not going to just steal it but she wanted a piece of it. Looking at the mazone who politely had bowed to her, she simply waved her hand to her before she headed to the one who was cooking the meat. Now, Hellhound was not sure how to go forward with this but she sure looked hungry and her mind seemed to overthink about what to do in this situation. She always had been a hunter before but she nearly had died and she was not anywhere familiar. Quietly for now, Hellhound sat near the fire but her eyes stared at the cooking boar for a bit. Even her tail anxiously moved from one side to another. "Hungry...", she murmured.