SilverGirl20

Julie had left the hospital and hid in the river that passed through the city instead of going back to her little lake. She had also stopped attending class as she was too scared to return and face her professors. She didnt even want to return to the surface. She floated near the bottom and stared up at the surface. The water distorted her view of the sky. She thought about returning to the deepest part of the ocean and disappearing. Maybe if she wasn't surrounded by so meny people she wouldn't feel isolated. She never felt lonely by herself in the ocean. However, her loneliness stuck out like a sore thumb when she was at school.

Mira had spent all afternoon yesterday in the library reading. She was happy that her first day of school was a success and that everyone was so accepting of her culture. In her little village, the natives didnt wear clothing. Those that did were looked down upon as if they were thieves trying to hide something. Her nakedness represented that she was trustworthy, truthful, pure, and had nothing to hide. Of course after reading a few cultural books, she understood that clothing was apart of other cultures so she did not look down on people that wore them. Anyways, hidden in a corner of the library, Mira had fallen asleep under one of the the tables. Her medical books were still sitting on the table. She had slept there all night without anyone noticing her yet.

@Icarian Dreams Yes it was said way after the rp started. I mentioned it because I saw everyone chatting but I did not think to tag anyone. I also wrote that she was dying many times in my reply posts for the rp. While we where roleplaying I tried to explain why my character was freaking out, how she got that way, what she needed to feel better, and that her storm ment she felt like she was close death. But your character can rest assured that she is not dead because I edited my post.

Anyways, I fixed everything. I took out all the parts mentioning animals and my character is not dead. She still needs food though

I wasn't in doubt when I was roleplaying so I didnt think to ask. That came after we started talking. My role play style is improv. I usually rp and stop if there is a problem. Then, I fix the problem and continue. It sounds like you guys like to plan things out which I'm not use to doing. When I asked @Thatannoyinggod to interact with my character, our planning didnt go any farther then me giving an explanation of what's going on with my character and me stating that she was d*ing from starvation.

I am not sure what is considered large world building decisions, but I won't scare away anymore animals and I won't kill my characters without directly asking the characters involved.

You wrote that your character had noticed the disappearing animals and wanted to find the source. I'm just use to writing and my partners asking me to fix it if they dont like it, when the event occurs. Like when @Icarian Dreamsstopped to discuss the tranks situation with you. I understand that I should have communicate more effectively, but when I said my character was dying in the Ooc, noone told me they were uncomfortable with that. I feel like I could have fixed my responses a long time ago if they had. I had asked @Thatannoyinggod if he wanted to save my character. I told him my character was dying before the storm even happened. This turned out really confusing. I dont know what Etiquette you are talking about because I don't think I learned the same rules as you. The main rules that I know about roleplaying are: don't God mode, Don't control other characters, and don't hit without letting the other characters respond.

I fixed it. Noone told me that it was an issue until now. I thought you were ok with her scaring away the animals because you acknowledged it in the rp and didnt say anything was wrong with it at the time.

I edited it so she wasn't dead. Also why is the wildlife thing an issue? Shes not very good at hunting so must of them were just scared off.

Yeah. That's fine. I tend to write more dramatic things when I'm depressed and I have been feeling like that alot recently. Since we can't got to real college it feels lonely. Sorry for making everyone uncomfortable. I'll try to avoid roleplaying for now.

I'm sorry. I wasn't trying to be disrespectful. I was just making decisions for my character. Also before, you said that it was ok and it's up to me if she died.

Sorry. She was trying to get food before the time skip. Then, at the party. I honestly tried to mention that she was starving and sick multiple times. It started as a character struggle where she needed help adapting to life on land, but in the end i felt like it was better to kill her off.

Well, I just dont like my characters to be immortal and life isn't always perfect so I try to reflect that. It's just my rp style, too make my characters and the rp world more realistic. I can make her reincarnated into an egg if you are uncomfortable with her being gone.

She was preparing to give up and in response all the pain she was feeling was starting to numb. Her vision was blurry but she could see the shadow of the professor rush towards her. She could feel his hand on her skin. Her body was loosing its heat, making her skin cold. "Thank you..." she exhaled. It was becoming hard to focus on their words. At first they sounded distant, then they only thing that filled her hears was a soft buzzing. If she was just been injured, then maybe she could have lasted longer. Her malnourished body felt like it was being crushed under the strange vines. Every breath was a struggled and her body was shutting down. (Edit) She desperately needed food before it was too late. Without it, she might not make it until the medics arrived. @Icarian Dreams @JennyDK

Yes. I've been waiting for the last person to respond. I was waiting to see if @Thatannoyinggod would offer her food, which was really the only thing that would change the outcome. But I posted a response so we can wrap it up.