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For my story that will be a game/book/comic. I've built most of it already and would enjoy y'all's help in fleshing out the small details to the universe I've built.

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  2. Arno

    Rossenbenen Kingdom

    Rossenbenen Kingdom is all German names. So it' hard V's and B's And the "Au" sound is distinct. Also purple squares are buildings, orange lines are roads, red stars are county seats, blue lines are rivers, black lines are borders, and green ^ are mountains and hills. Purple squares on the water are ships symbolizing docks.
  3. Neptune

    Rossenbenen Kingdom

    I would love to have a pronunciation guide to some of these towns and counties. Otherwise I'm going to end up screwing them up big time xD Also, have you done an icon guide?
  4. Arno

    Kingdom map

    Map of the kingdom where Arnor is from. Purple squares are houses that are beholden to the kingdom. Doesn't count for bandit villages. The country is heavily forested. The numbers and districts are named.
  5. Arno

    Cadus's companions

    Cadus's team mostly consists of a collection of companions and slaves he gathers along his travels. Ivi is his first companion. She is a lesser demon branded as a slave for the empire. Cadus's eldest brother gave her to him. Ivi is a main love interest for Cadus. Biggs is a human mercenary that was recruited by the empire to help fight. Cadus recruits him by dominating his will. Or at is a mentor to Ivi and is also a slave to the empire. He is won over by Cadus when Cadus kills one of his siblings. Eyten is Cadus's uncle. The man was the older brother of the emperor, but he was defeated and forced to become a slave soldier to his brother. Cadus gets him after killing another sibling. Seath is a bounty hunter that is dominated by Cadus. One of the siblings hired him to kill Cadus, but he was outmatched by Cadus. Iris is a witch that is drawn to Cadus and his power. She wishes to use his blood in dangerous rituals. She has the biggest bust of all companions between Arnor and Cadus. She is also a love interest for Cadus. She openly flirts with him. Silica is a monkey from the country that the empire is trying to invade. Cadus can romance her, but he has to break her will or bend to hers. Verra is Eyten's daughter. She too was taken as a slave soldier. Eyten catches wind of her and asks Cadus to save her. Cadus obliges and can romance her if he pleases. 1T0R is a robot Cadus defeats and Biggs can reprogram for Cadus to use. 1T0R is a former warlord droid of Iron Star.
  6. Arno

    Arnor's Party

    Just a big pic of all the current companions I have lined up for Arnor to get within his story. Arnor uses a broadsword. Cadus is obviously a temporary companion cause he gets kidnapped. Cadus carries a claymore. Sally is a spunky lab that was in one of those lewd pics I posted before. She is a potential love interest for Arnor but acts heavily like a big sister to him. Sally uses fist and leg gear to put some oomh behind a punch. Hayden is a coyote that s a friend of Arnor's actual older brother. Hayden decides to help Arnor out when he's in need. Hayden uses pickhammers as weapons. Keo is a little thief that 13thprotector runs into and brings in to help Arnor. Keo is also a love interest, but she initially hates Arnor and is very heavily a tsundere, at least once the romance happens. Keo uses knives. 13thprotector is a lost soul that is recruited by angels to fight for good. When Arnor meets him 13th is different than in this pic. 13th uses longswords and great swords Cecilia is an angel that is hunting down demons with her own party. She is the only surviving member of her party and joins Arnor when they meet. She is a love interest for Arnor, she is a very motherly type and their union would be considered a taboo of sorts. She is a white mage and a primary healer, but has some offensive attacks in more powerful magic than any other party member can use. Eroch is an old friend of Arnor's dead father. The old bull wants an honorable death and follows Arnor out of obligation to the boy's father. Eroch carries heavy axes or warhammers. N1R4, or Nira, is an android that 13thprotector helped out at some point when he temporarily leaves Arnor's party. He recruits her for Arnor's team in exchange both 13th and Arnor would help he on her own mission later down the line. Nira is a love interest for Arnor as well, but first he needs to teach her how to love in "that way" and get her some extra parts. Nira uses guns and arm cannons, unlike the others she cannot use magic so she resorts to augments and artillery. Those boobs are deadly.
  7. Arno

    comment/feedback Thoughts

    I was,thinking that he first try to actually gain transportation. But he would be turned down cause he's obviously a lowly peasant and the kingdoms he goes to don't want to get involved in a war with the Empire. And with every imperial agent that Arnor would fight along the way that would be apart of quests that either help the kingdoms or refugees pushed from their homes or towns under control.
  8. Neptune

    comment/feedback Thoughts

    I suppose it could depend on how lucky he is. Then again, he could get lucky.. and then unlucky. Like he could earn enough money through a quest to afford faster transport. Then loses the money, or the transport gets lost/stolen/killed. Give the reader a little bit of hope and then snatch it away again >D
  9. Arno

    comment/feedback Thoughts

    Well he comes from a dirt poor village. He probably won't get much dosh between quests and travels
  10. Neptune

    comment/feedback Thoughts

    Then again, even if there is a faster mode of transportation, I think you've made it clear that Armor is not exactly swimming in money. If he can't afford such transport, then he will indeed have to make the trek on foot.
  11. Arno

    comment/feedback Thoughts

    They probably could have a faster mode of transportation, but the world is quite large if my scaling is right. I could go for less time all together.
  12. Neptune

    comment/feedback Thoughts

    That is quite the journey. I take it that they don't have a faster mode of transport like an equivalent to a horse?
  13. Arno

    comment/feedback Thoughts

    It's gonna take Arnor approimately 4-6 years to reach the Empire on foot. I mean that's through terrain and war, cause he will need to fight his way into the country and smuggle his way through the cities and what not. In the meantime, Cadus will damage the infrastructure of the Empire from the inside out.
  14. Neptune

    comment/feedback Thoughts

    Oh yeah he is not likely to have a good time of it D: Well. adversity like that makes for good story telling xD
  15. Arno

    comment/feedback Thoughts

    Well Arnor doesn't like the open sea very much, so it'l be rough on him to pass those channels between the countries. And it's a fairly cold region, the big desert has an icy tinge to it closer south, and then all the mountains and forests and such will be difficult. Not to mention he gets to fight some of Cadus's siblings who are in advanced parties that are infiltrating countries.
  16. Neptune

    comment/feedback Thoughts

    That is quite the trek. It should make for a very interesting, exciting adventure. And it looks like he might have to take a few boat rides, too. I imagine the terrain isn't too friendly, either?
  17. Arno

    comment/feedback Thoughts

    Yes. For Cadus it' a war of resentment and anger to his actual family and for Arnor it's a rescue mission. I mean it'll take him a long time to get there and Cadus has a lot of siblings to kill. If you saw the map it's a walk for Arnor across land from the little gold circle to the big red capital star in the industrial area.
  18. I rather like the plot. It's got a good motivation for the Empire's kidnapping of Cadus, because of their wide reaching plan. It also makes me feel sympathetic towards Cadus because how he is, was not exactly something he asked for and now that is being used to essentially enslave him. And I like that Arnor has a definite motivation to save him. Although that's two-fold. One; to stop the Empire but I imagine the main one is to save his adopted brother. Am I correct there? It's a simple story arch, but an effective one. I think it will definitely make for a good story.
  19. Arno

    Arnor

    The second character is Cadus's long time friend and practically brother to, Arnor Windsong. He will be the title character, but the story will be spread pretty evenly between characters. Arnor is a little mut living with his mom and Cadus in a small village on the coast. They don't have much, but Arnor would do anything to keep his family together.
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