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For my story that will be a game/book/comic. I've built most of it already and would enjoy y'all's help in fleshing out the small details to the universe I've built.

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  2. Arno

    Rossenbenen Kingdom

    Rossenbenen Kingdom is all German names. So it' hard V's and B's And the "Au" sound is distinct. Also purple squares are buildings, orange lines are roads, red stars are county seats, blue lines are rivers, black lines are borders, and green ^ are mountains and hills. Purple squares on the water are ships symbolizing docks.
  3. Neptune

    Rossenbenen Kingdom

    I would love to have a pronunciation guide to some of these towns and counties. Otherwise I'm going to end up screwing them up big time xD Also, have you done an icon guide?
  4. Arno

    Kingdom map

    Map of the kingdom where Arnor is from. Purple squares are houses that are beholden to the kingdom. Doesn't count for bandit villages. The country is heavily forested. The numbers and districts are named.
  5. Arno

    Cadus's companions

    Cadus's team mostly consists of a collection of companions and slaves he gathers along his travels. Ivi is his first companion. She is a lesser demon branded as a slave for the empire. Cadus's eldest brother gave her to him. Ivi is a main love interest for Cadus. Biggs is a human mercenary that was recruited by the empire to help fight....
  6. Arno

    Arnor's Party

    Just a big pic of all the current companions I have lined up for Arnor to get within his story. Arnor uses a broadsword. Cadus is obviously a temporary companion cause he gets kidnapped. Cadus carries a claymore. Sally is a spunky lab that was in one of those lewd pics I posted before. She is a potential love interest for Arnor but acts...
  7. Arno

    comment/feedback Thoughts

    I was,thinking that he first try to actually gain transportation. But he would be turned down cause he's obviously a lowly peasant and the kingdoms he goes to don't want to get involved in a war with the Empire. And with every imperial agent that Arnor would fight along the way that would be apart of quests that either help the kingdoms or...
  8. Neptune

    comment/feedback Thoughts

    I suppose it could depend on how lucky he is. Then again, he could get lucky.. and then unlucky. Like he could earn enough money through a quest to afford faster transport. Then loses the money, or the transport gets lost/stolen/killed. Give the reader a little bit of hope and then snatch it away again >D
  9. Arno

    comment/feedback Thoughts

    Well he comes from a dirt poor village. He probably won't get much dosh between quests and travels
  10. Neptune

    comment/feedback Thoughts

    Then again, even if there is a faster mode of transportation, I think you've made it clear that Armor is not exactly swimming in money. If he can't afford such transport, then he will indeed have to make the trek on foot.
  11. Arno

    comment/feedback Thoughts

    They probably could have a faster mode of transportation, but the world is quite large if my scaling is right. I could go for less time all together.
  12. Neptune

    comment/feedback Thoughts

    That is quite the journey. I take it that they don't have a faster mode of transport like an equivalent to a horse?
  13. Arno

    comment/feedback Thoughts

    It's gonna take Arnor approimately 4-6 years to reach the Empire on foot. I mean that's through terrain and war, cause he will need to fight his way into the country and smuggle his way through the cities and what not. In the meantime, Cadus will damage the infrastructure of the Empire from the inside out.
  14. Neptune

    comment/feedback Thoughts

    Oh yeah he is not likely to have a good time of it D: Well. adversity like that makes for good story telling xD
  15. Arno

    comment/feedback Thoughts

    Well Arnor doesn't like the open sea very much, so it'l be rough on him to pass those channels between the countries. And it's a fairly cold region, the big desert has an icy tinge to it closer south, and then all the mountains and forests and such will be difficult. Not to mention he gets to fight some of Cadus's siblings who are in advanced...
  16. Neptune

    comment/feedback Thoughts

    That is quite the trek. It should make for a very interesting, exciting adventure. And it looks like he might have to take a few boat rides, too. I imagine the terrain isn't too friendly, either?
  17. Arno

    comment/feedback Thoughts

    Yes. For Cadus it' a war of resentment and anger to his actual family and for Arnor it's a rescue mission. I mean it'll take him a long time to get there and Cadus has a lot of siblings to kill. If you saw the map it's a walk for Arnor across land from the little gold circle to the big red capital star in the industrial area.
  18. I rather like the plot. It's got a good motivation for the Empire's kidnapping of Cadus, because of their wide reaching plan. It also makes me feel sympathetic towards Cadus because how he is, was not exactly something he asked for and now that is being used to essentially enslave him. And I like that Arnor has a definite motivation to...
  19. Arno

    Arnor

    The second character is Cadus's long time friend and practically brother to, Arnor Windsong. He will be the title character, but the story will be spread pretty evenly between characters. Arnor is a little mut living with his mom and Cadus in a small village on the coast. They don't have much, but Arnor would do anything to keep his family...
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