Detective's first big case (LazarusLuna x Hal 9000)

[HAL 9000]

please note: I do NOT write detective stories, so I am not an expert on writing them! if you have a problem, politely tell me. 

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Premice: Detective Jackson has been called in to work on a missing persons case with connections to a local night club. This is one of his first big cases and while he wants to keep this professional, one possible witness in particular makes him feel rather protective of her.... In a race against time, Jackson needs to find the girls before they go missing forever and protect Lunara from those who wish to keep her quiet and have her join those that have vanished....

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Detective Jackson looked in through the one way mirror into the interrogation room at his witness, a young  lupine woman just out of her teens. He found it hard to believe that she had anything to do with these disappearances, but the case listed her as a possible suspect at worst, and a witness at best.... 

"Jackson, so far you've dealt with some petty crimes, this is the big one.... We expect great things from you, so don't disappoint us" The commissioner explains, patting the grey furred canine on the back. The commissioner was large, even for a bull, but he carried an air of professionalism about him.

Jack nods and smiles a little "of course, sir. " he replies, grabbing his folder and walking through the door into the room. 

He sat down at the interrogation table, pushing over a couple photos to Lunara. He had brought her in due to her closeness to some of the staff and missing people. He didn't think she was behind these disappearances, but he wanted to be sure she had nothing he could use for the investigation. The photos were of a pair of girls, the first a feline with her fur dyed bright red, a girl who had worked alongside Lunara. The other was a raven haired human girl in her teens who had been a frequent customer. "Do you recognize either of these girls, miss Lunara?" he asks, his voice cool and composed. 

Edited February 24, 2019 by HAL 9000
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