ThatLewdCat

The question is... One shower stall for the whole big crew? Mmhh... I know from personal experience how it feels to have one bathroom/shower in a huge family. I bet this would feel even worse then! Standing in line, all that... Oof. Upd: Well, TWO, if we look at the picture closely. Two areas marked with number 14 aka Restroom... Still! Just two, for a whole big ship? I dunno!

"RestRooms", I believe. Considering the description in the location-related thread:

Posted my character... Hope she's fine and would fit into the crew well.

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I might pick the Pilot position some time later... But when I actually see this club somehow "moving", so to speak. For now, it's a tad bit too silent/passive here, I'm afraid.

I will say only one last thing and once again only speak for myself, not for others: "Suspension of Disbelief". For me, it can only stretch up to a certain point where things are logical and make sense, even if it's in some fantastical world where much more things are allowed to happen than in our real world. The moment logic breaks... the suspension of disbelief breaks. Sorry. I wish you luck in your creation. Again, wasn't my intention to attack you/your club or ruin your mood.

This was literally a question I asked too... ...but hardly got a proper answer. I feel like @Kitsuyumia is not sure what she even wants herself. If you wanted the whole sci-fi space thing with aliens to be JUST BACKGROUND for "personal relationships" between characters, then why even bother with this whole extinction event and ark ship? Yeah, you said it already - to ensure "a feeling of isolation", sure sure. I get it. I read you, loud and clear. But that could be done with much easier setups. And most importantly - much more logically sound than what there is now. There are just SO MANY "holes" at the very core of your plot. I already explained some of the things in my previous post there. And I actually find it a bit funny how you said that you don't want cryosleep because "it's physically impossible to achieve", despite the fact that we're talking future, sci-fi, possibly alien technologies that are beyond our current modern understanding which could possible handle that issue described by you... And yet you're fine with a huge amount of other illogical inconsistencies that don't make sense even in sci-fi? Such as a the very core idea of this "ark ship" that started from Earth and yet supposed to house not just humans, but also aliens? Considering a full on "extinction event", pretty much? And to add to that... You say the ship is large enough to house everyone(including aliens!) and is powered by a microstar? Do you even realize how much resources and time is needed to create that and what kind of SIZE that thing is supposed to be then? And, if we're talking housing the whole population of Earth - along with aliens too - why people aren't living on such mega-ships or space stations in the first place and cling to planets then? None of that makes sense. And there's seriously so many more weird stuff that could be entirely avoided by simply not going up that whole ark ship trope, but instead just making it a large space station in deep space. So deep and far that the feeling of "isolation" is there too - ships need months to get to this distant outpost in the middle of nowhere. Or if you want even further isolation - just have some space anomaly around that station too. Either completely pulling the whole station into some alternate dimension or there's some sort of nebulae/gravitational anomaly circle around it that prevents FTL travel to this station directly, so ships will have to go through this anomaly on sub-FTL speeds. And it takes time to go through that anomaly, so no daily arrivals and supplies, ya know. Nor any quick support, in case of emergencies. Quite fitting for a term "isolation", no? That way, this whole soup of alien species could be logically explained, as well as doesn't require billions of "hypothetical" NPCs to handle. And so on, so forth. It could also allow for easier handling of possible missions that you promised. But also just serve as a background - for personal relationships between characters who just live in this sci-fi world, on this space station. Also, please... @Kitsuyumia ... Please, tone down that "attitude"? We read you loud and clear, again. You just have to better explain your thoughts, so everyone sees and understands everything properly. Maybe finally start filling up that Lore Info for example? By answering those questions that are asked already multiple times? Or at least create a Q&A/FAQ thread for such things? To answer the "common" questions? These are not personal attacks on you or your creation. It's suggestions/criticism of your work - to make it better, logical, easy to use. I can't speak for others, only for myself. I'm not trying to "trash talk" your creation. I'm trying to help. Isn't that why you created this "Suggestions" thread in the first place?

Some mood music for you, people. And that channel has A LOT MORE of stuff like that.

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@Gardsorm actually offered a good point there - security/military force. It's possible to easily beat the crap out and injure a human or any other regular alien... But now try that with a robotic slime-creature that is made from nanomachines! Bullet-holes just heal up, while bullets themselves get stick inside without going through(preventing people hiding behind her being hurt!). No internal anatomy either, so no internal injuries from possible combat. And so on, so forth. Lots of benefits for security/army, ya know! Unless EMP weaponry is used... That's when I bet the nano-machines would loose connection/cohesion and this would lead to an effect similar to a stun grenade to a human(or alien), disabling such robo-slime from combat-ready state for a period of time that it'll need to recover back to norm. Hmm... But hey, there are always downsides, ya know?

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Well, at least I can hope my writing is interesting.

Excuse me? Oh... Without knowing the context about the reasons for why you're in a hospital, I guess I should say... Get well soon? \o/