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I think your way (and the way the introduction to each act is actually written) generated a more cohesive story. Mine stumbles and lurches - which I don't hate. My journal for this looks and reads like addled thoughts. Yours evolved a moving narrative, that propels itself into a powerful epilogue. Well done, and thank you for sharing.

I pulled all three first, and to be fair, I might have reordered the one where she destroyed something of hers just because it didn't feel right being the first thing. But yes, I pulled all 3 minor then their related major and thought on each answer, then tried to give a cohesive thread through the three. It felt right to do it that way.

You're welcome, and thanks for playing along. I still need to finish mine, but I am still on task. Just not posting photos anymore.

I am NOT enjoying seeing my penmanship on display, and it's also an annoying chore to photograph, resize color balance and post it, so no more photos. If you liked them, apologies. I can point you do a dozen places to buy a fountain pen and a journal. When last we left our amnesiac, she had found her house and the cards had lead us to the trash. Judgement signifies awakening, rebirth or significant change. It turns out her name is Chrysanthemum De La Raya (never ask a twelve year old for advice on these things) and what she found in her trash was a coffee stained bill for chemotherapy from the hospital. Ouch. Tough news to wake up t

Shinigami felt annoyed by the answer. Sure, if she was this good, eluding a god might not be out of her range of power. But a detail amused her. "If you mean the cat, I survived her as well. I don't know if she is a goddess but she is irritatingly powerful. My mother didn't tell me a lot about her power but she did give me life. She likes toying with me or humans just the same. If she is the one who made those relics for me then no wonder she was upset when I destroyed them along with my home.", she said with a bit of a grin. "Can't tell you what she's plotting, though. Even I don't know.", she added. She knew what she was herself but being a

Not necessarily a spot to whinge about it, but more than likely they want someone to write a story with , this not a knock on anyone who has 3 paragraph replies.