Keep one word; Change one word or Add one word

[WritesNaughtyStories]

I'm interested to see what happens if we change the game just a little. Rules are the same as Keep/Change but you may, instead of changing a word, add one. No limit to how long it can get. Just for grins, adding, changing or deleting one punctuation mark can be part of either a change or addition, but must immediately precede or follow the word changed or added. Think monkeys and typewriters...

Just to keep things clean, I'll start in the next post.

Damn it Ecchia, don't help.

Dreams

Edited May 9 by WritesNaughtyStories
Neatness counts, friends. Except Ecchia doesn't like one word replies. Frankly, no one REALLY does, but there was a plan, man.

[bumpnrun]

I like the concept. How about an example of how the punctuation change works with adding or changing a word. I'm not quite sure how that works.

[WritesNaughtyStories]

Dreams live.

[WritesNaughtyStories]

28 minutes ago, bumpnrun said:

I like the concept. How about an example of how the punctuation change works with adding or changing a word. I'm not quite sure how that works.

Now that I've toyed with it I've revised it to read "adding, changing or deleting one punctuation mark" but do we change it further so that each "turn" can just include one punctuation mark add, change or removal? Or do we just go all free and chaotic with punctuation, in the true spirit of infinite monkeys and typewriters? Because "Let's eat, people." can become "Let's eat people, now." and that kind of radical change in meaning is VERY funny to me.

Edited May 9 by WritesNaughtyStories

[bumpnrun]

That is funny to me also and punctuation is everything in writing. I just hope you keep the rules simple so a simple guy like me can keep up.

[WritesNaughtyStories]

I think we have, keep all but one that you can change or add one. Do whatever the hell you want with punctuation.

[WritesNaughtyStories]

Imagine 

[bumpnrun]

Imagine everyone

[WritesNaughtyStories]

Imagine everyone smiling

[Never Shore]

Imagine everyone smiling naked

[WritesNaughtyStories]

Imagine everyone getting naked

[IsabellaRose]

Imagine involuntarily getting naked

[Never Shore]

Imagine involuntarily getting aroused

[IsabellaRose]

We're involuntarily getting aroused

[Lakia]

We're involuntarily getting penguins aroused 

[IsabellaRose]

Who's involuntarily getting penguins aroused?

[WritesNaughtyStories]

Who's intentionally getting penguins aroused?

[IsabellaRose]

Who's intentionally getting penguins alone?

[bumpnrun]

Who's intentionally petting penguins alone?

[IsabellaRose]

Who's gently petting penguins alone?

[WritesNaughtyStories]

Who's gently petting penguins alone? Me.

[bumpnrun]

Who's gently petting penises alone? Me.

(Sorry, I just couldn't resist)

[IsabellaRose]

Who's excitedly petting penises alone? Me.

[WritesNaughtyStories]

Who's excitedly petting penises alone? Me-maw?

[bumpnrun]

Who's excitedly petting penises alone? Me-maw and