General OOC

[Balthier]

21 hours ago, SataiRolePlayingGuy said:

Will see how receptive Exzelcryth is, when Zorn gives her that offer.  A different partnership.  A potential twist there.  Just as Exzel tries to corrupt Elie and Alexandrine.  She might be divided between loyalty (feelings?) for him, and growing desires for the women.  Pulled between  Light and Dark.  He won’t treat her like a plaything or slave.  Either an equal partner, or if she chooses to serve him, a well treated general, almost second in command.  Only possible rival, is Emi, if she starts give into darkness.  Zorn’s little girl could rule at his side.

I do like the internal conflict. I don't think she wants to be like a general though. I believe she would like to stick to her covert fun. Nexus devils get wander lust sometimes, so having no big responsibility and being able to just walk away to explore is more important to them. I believe she favors more 'soft power'/behind the scenes dealings. She might try to stay a shade of grey, between Light and Dark, but not sure how that will end for her.

Honestly want to see where she goes through RP between her, Alexandrine,  Elie and Zorn. Or anyone else she comes across, and just let the story unfold kinda organically if that makes sense?

[SataiRolePlayingGuy]

Yeah, that’s good.  She can try as hard as she wants to make Alexandrine her’s too.  It is possible she will succeed.  Though she has competition with Emi and Rin, Toshiro maybe too, if he gives her a good enough fucking in Wanderers.

[Balthier]

Eventually, I have an idea to introduce more villains as minor (guest?) characters perhaps, when we need more story, if interest stays good. But very evil types. Remnants of Gyomao's Army, out to establish their own empire, if they learn Exzel is here and alive to recapture or punish her also. I don't plan on them being nice, at all. But they an cause some havok, and perhaps get taken down by either Zorn's group, or Alexandrine's group, or both. Just a thought for a potential story thread I've had kicking around for a while. Nothing to rush into. Just Exzel's past catching up with her.

Being a virgin, I'm waiting to see if Toshiro cums right away, not that that's a problem with knights on magical girls.

Edited May 21 by Balthier

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A part of me wanted to introduce a kind of god(dess) or something. I remember we spoke of threats being anything from demons to aliens so I wondered if the same could be applied with potential magic gods or the likes. Now, I understand that certain character might be too OP buuut this is always adjustable. I don't know how far this can go, though.

[Balthier]

Hhhhmmm, like the Merciful Goddess from Saiyuki? Or war god Nataku?

[SataiRolePlayingGuy]

9 minutes ago, Balthier said:

Eventually, I have an idea to introduce more villains as minor (guest?) characters perhaps, when we need more story, if interest stays good. But very evil types. Remnants of Gyomao's Army, out to establish their own empire, if they learn Exzel is here and alive to recapture or punish her also. I don't plan on them being nice, at all. But they an cause some havok, and perhaps get taken down by either Zorn's group, or Alexandrine's group, or both. Just a thought for a potential story thread I've had kicking around for a while. Nothing to rush into. Just Exzel's past catching up with her.

Being a virgin, I'm waiting to see if Toshiro cums right away, not that that's a problem with knights on magical girls.

It could be a way for either Zorn or Alexandrine to draw her closer.  Depending on when/where it happens, and if a push towards one side or another could be interesting.  
 

9 minutes ago, Warning said:

A part of me wanted to introduce a kind of god(dess) or something. I remember we spoke of threats being anything from demons to aliens so I wondered if the same could be applied with potential magic gods or the likes. Now, I understand that certain character might be too OP buuut this is always adjustable. I don't know how far this can go, though.

The Guardian Beasts were a step in that direction.  Maybe not quite gods, but rather powerful.  You could make another one of those if you want.  Will consider something ‘higher’ than that.

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I was thinking Lenneth. Now, hear me out, I have a very cute fan pic of a certain loli Lenneth and she is pretty cool. She is also a direct reference to SO3 Lenneth, which means she is 100% out there to fight humans. This girl needs more personality and development though, and I think it could be done. Plus, smol girl with big spear. What's not to like?

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Edited May 21 by Warning

[SataiRolePlayingGuy]

Yeah, we could probably do that.  Maybe make it a goddess Zorn and/or Exzelcryth already worship maybe.  They either do something to get her attention, or she chooses to help on her own.

[Balthier]

Was just thinking. If Fujiko was going to reveal herself to Alexandrine one day. She might consider having her being cuffed or strapped to a bed first. Then make her cum again and again after she reveals her true form. Probably even better if she shape-shiftef into a futa form.

Just a thought, seeing how you'd feel about that?

Edited May 21 by Balthier

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I mean, here's the issue. I didn't really think about the worship part and being worshipped by demons seems a little odd. I like the idea of godly characters but I would not want to make anyone uncomfortable with it. (Feeling devalued by another character is not fun) If she has the power to get rid of Alexandrine, it would kinda turn the story pretty bad. Ironically, I don't think she is the kind to just "invade" a world and destroy it. She'd wait to be challenged, therefore keeping the power balance fair. A demon is far more invasive in nature.

So I wonder how Zorn would know her. Or anyone, tbh. She is random enough that she wouldn't fear wandering in towns but she has little reasons to really do it. IF I was to use her, she is also possible to bring into lewd situations but she is really more "Battle" than "Sexual" so she wouldn't try to trigger it but someone might still be able to bring her into it. Buuut I still have many questions about how to make this work IF I went there. I would want to develop her somehow but this needs to be done the right way, not the wrong way.

Edited May 21 by Warning

[SataiRolePlayingGuy]

Okay.  I made it official, a Broken Girl of Alexandrine’s team will show up.  But who will play it is still up in the air.  Maybe it is ‘Mystery Character’, but I have offers out to two people as well, will see if someone else plays her.

[Warning]

I might still need to hear opinions about Lenneth. Like, if she would make a good character or not. The "where she comes from" might be a little weird since there's no god world of sort. Unless there is. But would a powerful loli be a good idea? Also, I imagine that if Lenneth was worshiped anyhow, it would be in older times. This version however is a "young" version with no real origins. Funny thing is, she has the same property has magical girls. I could develop her oddly natural, though. Innocent. (She'd still be an enemy of humanity or seen as.)

[SataiRolePlayingGuy]

Yeah, I was not skipping that, have to think about it a little.

It will be at least a few days before Broken Girl shows up.  First offer was to the new member who has not started yet.  Two more days of her busy, then she wants to read our stuff.  See how long that takes, and then what she does for character(s).  If she isn’t interested, I offered Elie, who is thinking about it.  If neither of them want to do it, then it will probably be mystery character.

[Balthier]

It's starts to get taxing playing a lot of characters over time though doesn't it? Though I guess it could give you good variety. It gets to be a lot, I know, for me, keeping it all organized with different things going on all over. Sometime it is necessary for story though. Long as you can keep having fun without burning out, that's the thing I think.

We do have quite a bit to read through now. Although everyone seems to be good writing so it reads pretty well I think.

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If I was to use her, I probably would not make her "unbeatably" powerful but she'd definitely be stronger than any humans. Her behavior also plays in the balance. (By example, someone who is OP and searches to destroy everything would just leave a wasteland.) But Lenneth is thankfully not Odin or Ragnarok. So she's fine on this side.

She would probably be a little stronger than Alexandrine for sure. I know I saw versions of Lenneth that doesn't give her an absolute god mode. She is still fearsome. (Balancing this right is always the hardest part, isn't it?) But I think the most important question is if she'd be fun to have around. She can be used sexually but not sealed.

Edited May 22 by Warning

[SataiRolePlayingGuy]

Oh I’ve played a lot of characters at a time before.

And good job, Exzelcryth has not won completely yet, but she took a very big step in claiming Alexandrine.

[Warning]

5 minutes ago, Balthier said:

It's starts to get taxing playing a lot of characters over time though doesn't it?

It's the fun part. I love writing LOT of characters. But I always look like I struggle left and right because I need to make sure I write them fairly. This is why I often ask questions about what sounds right or not. If I find the right vibe then I can use many characters without issues. It's even fun to see such characters interact with each others.

[Balthier]

Exzel has Daimond exactly where she wants her. The only thing she didn't forsee was Elie's emotions overpowering her lust even from the mark. So I went along to see where the story takes us.

[SataiRolePlayingGuy]

Yep.  Route split choice for Exzel.  I’ll tell you now, Alexandrine has much higher chance of giving in completely if Exzel remains with her.  Though unfortunately I’m done for tonight.

[BladeRunner]

Well, my angle (to reply to whomever) with Gierne'ham was to have more a neutral character than one that's evil. His sole objective is to find the Knight that put his father down, not out of vengeance but more so to prove his own power. Pretty much he's the type of guy to fight whatever is strong, let it be demon, monster, Human, and so on. 

Whether he's absolutely evil or not is to be explored in RP

[Chiyako]

Sorry! Yes I have been busy. Will be busy these next two weeks at least!

[SataiRolePlayingGuy]

35 minutes ago, Chiyako said:

Sorry! Yes I have been busy. Will be busy these next two weeks at least!

It’s ok.  Let’s see how ‘corrupted’ Alexandrine is on your return.

[Chiyako]

6 minutes ago, SataiRolePlayingGuy said:

It’s ok.  Let’s see how ‘corrupted’ Alexandrine is on your return.

Egads!

@SataiRolePlayingGuy @BladeRunner Also if I don't respond for a while with Emi during the RP with Toshiro and Alexandrine and Emi then feel free to continue and assume Emi is just watching and cheering them on (until it comes time for her to have more involvement)!

[SataiRolePlayingGuy]

5 minutes ago, Chiyako said:

Egads!

@SataiRolePlayingGuy @BladeRunner Also if I don't respond for a while with Emi during the RP with Toshiro and Alexandrine and Emi then feel free to continue and assume Emi is just watching and cheering them on (until it comes time for her to have more involvement)!

It won’t the joining Zorn level corruption, but maybe new Alexandrine will try to get Emi to embrace her demon side.

[Chiyako]

Well that will be exciting! Heck just the thought of being betrayed, that Alexandrine might be working with Demons, would actually help to push her in that direction.

That said any Demons who do attempt such things are in for a rude though perhaps amusing surprise.

Demon Emi will also probably come out swinging hard. Right now it is uncontrolled.