DreamsnThings Posted June 14 Posted June 14 So its come to my attention that DNangel is allready the name of a manga... so im considering renaming her to something like Jenetics or some other similar play on words I dont like being a copy cat x.x
AsBloodTurnsEverCold Posted June 14 Author Posted June 14 Lol I think it's fine to keep that name. Not really copying as it's not the same premise of anything but Jenetics is pretty cute too.
DreamsnThings Posted June 14 Posted June 14 DNAngel works just... better honestly x3 Jenetics feels a little odd honestly for a few reasons... but also feels better for a borderline civilian super without a proper secret identity, more of a code name 1
AsBloodTurnsEverCold Posted June 14 Author Posted June 14 Yeah DNAngel is a cute name though I could see Jenetics as a nickname actually like something someone might call their favorite doctor or nurse. I'd say don't worry about sharing the name with a manga or anything. DNAngel is great.
DreamsnThings Posted June 14 Posted June 14 I got it! instead of dna ill go off of RNA! RNAngel!... ... does not have the same ring >n< fuck it instead of angel amy? DNamy? ... bleh I dont know... dnangel works too well 1
AsBloodTurnsEverCold Posted June 14 Author Posted June 14 Lol I'd just stick with that then. It really does fit the character you're making perfectly.
DreamsnThings Posted June 14 Posted June 14 hrmmm im still trying... DNAegis? I like the sound of this one but the meaning doesnt line up quite as well with the charactter, but it could still work I think...
AsBloodTurnsEverCold Posted June 14 Author Posted June 14 (edited) DNAmplifier? Might be too on those nose if you're trying to be creative with the name lol. DNAmbrosia? Doesn't quite roll of the tongue as well though I guess. DNAether? Bit of a reach but Aether has a lot to do with the body (or was thought to) and especially divine bodies so could work. Edited June 14 by AsBloodTurnsEverCold
DreamsnThings Posted June 14 Posted June 14 DNApex sounds awesome as hell... for a different character who was not a glorified sex toy steroid hybrid
AsBloodTurnsEverCold Posted June 14 Author Posted June 14 X-men villain type name but it would be super cool. DNAzoth? DNAmaze? Definitely a silver-age type of name lol
DreamsnThings Posted June 14 Posted June 14 DNangst, hillarious but self depricating and a little odd for a 23 year old to call herself that DNanal... also hillarious, but again odd for someone with a little bit of a odd sexual situation to willingly put anal in their name ...DNangel might just be the simple option honestly 1
DreamsnThings Posted June 15 Posted June 15 okay I need a list of what I need to finish off my sheet x.x anything aside from the picture, the power detail, and the A ranking for potential that I need to edit in that I need to tweak/address?
AsBloodTurnsEverCold Posted June 15 Author Posted June 15 Weaknesses but that goes in Power Detail Other than that you've pretty much got the list down
DreamsnThings Posted June 15 Posted June 15 ah, well as far as weaknesses goes that just boils down to control F with a power that helps anyone who violates her but if that was not bad enough yay for trust issues!
AsBloodTurnsEverCold Posted June 15 Author Posted June 15 Well any other weakness would also be ways for people to not exactly be affected by it otherwise that is a significant weakness!
DreamsnThings Posted June 15 Posted June 15 ah so for example most powered characters being less affected by my pheromones would be a pretty big weakness 1
AsBloodTurnsEverCold Posted June 15 Author Posted June 15 Yep! Pretty much stuff like that Ways her powers might not work, be turned on her, exploited, weaker. That stuff. Trying to keep things balanced so some weaknesses are necessary (your example would be a big one)
DreamsnThings Posted June 15 Posted June 15 ... Im realizing I have so many massive weaknesses XD next to no control of her powers, others are able to forcibly activate them, her defensive power doesnt work on supers that are not allready attracted to her, her appearence modifier is half random and simply makes her more appealing to whoever is looking at her in a given moment, her actually useful abilities all have specific triggers keeping her from using them... she is definitely an example of so many weaknesses 1
DreamsnThings Posted June 15 Posted June 15 updated her a bit, i think i just need to tweak the specifics of the sidepiece powers
AsBloodTurnsEverCold Posted June 15 Author Posted June 15 Bit better (which one is she meant to be in that picture?) You could probably move the Side-Piece powers area up under her abilities. Makes more sense to go there in my view. And maybe move the letter grades of her stats inside the [] at least but otherwise looking better!
DreamsnThings Posted June 15 Posted June 15 On 6/15/2025 at 8:05 PM, AsBloodTurnsEverCold said: which one is she meant to be in that picture? Expand thats the fun part! both, depending on when and who is looking at her :3 I want to keep the side piece powers distinctly seperate since they are intended to function and be discovered a little more free form at this point, and Im going to be documenting what causes a given sidepiece down there, I can adjust the exact position a little, but I want them clearly seperate the letter grades I can tweak sure 1
AsBloodTurnsEverCold Posted June 15 Author Posted June 15 Lol right Gotcha gotcha, thats fine then just been trying to keep formatting at least somewhat in line. I'm fine with documenting them as she discovers what they do. That seems fun!
DreamsnThings Posted June 15 Posted June 15 well I did a take 2 to try and edit things to better fit, let me know if i need to tweak things 1
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