The Edit Game

[Mysthero]

This is a fun writing practice I used to do to try and improve my writing skills. If anyone wants to participate, I would love to see what you can do!

Here's how it works we start with a 3 word sentence.

Each person can add 1 word and edit 1 word.

You then list your changes beneath the new version.

Example A: The cat ran

Example B: The fast cat runs

Added fast, changed ran to runs.

Whatever you edit a word to be it, it has to be similar to it's original form.

Example C : Ran-Run-Runs-Running

The end goal is to tell a story. You can theoretically end up with dozens of paragraphs if enough is added. What naughty story can we come up with as a group I wonder?

So I will give a base sentence, look forward to playing with you all!

 

She had orgasmed!

 

[PetitChaton]

She had multiple orgasms.

[Mysthero]

She has multiple powerful orgasms.

Added "powerful" changed "Had" to "has"

[PetitChaton]

He had multiple orgasms, daily.

Changed "she" to "he" and added "daily." 

[SnowFall]

He must have multiple orgasms, daily.

Added must, changed had to have.

[Kalvoras Vertal Banned]

He must've had multiple orgasms daily since she worked him so hard for hours on end.

"Merged must and have, added 'had', removed the comma, added 'since she worked him so hard for hours on end'. :3"

[Mysthero]

Lol, you're supposed to only add 1 word, it's okay if it doesn't form a complete sentence.

[Kalvoras Vertal Banned]

"Awwwww.... Can it stay, though? :3"

[Novaer]

4 hours ago, SnowFall said:

He must have multiple orgasms, daily.

Added must, changed had to have.

Xir must not have multiple orgasms, daily.

Added Not, changed He to Xir; how dare you shitlords assume their gender. Lol.

[IsabellaRose]

She legally must not have multiple orgasms, daily.

added "legally", changed "Xir" to "She" because I'm full of assumptions.

[Venari99 Deactivated]

She legally must always have multiple explosive orgasms, daily.

Changed not to always because orgasms are fun! And I added explosive, because if she legally has to, then can you imagine her missing a day if the things are that intense?

[IsabellaRose]

She legally must always give men multiple, explosive orgasms, daily.

changed "have" to "give" and added "men"

[Venari99 Deactivated]

She legally must always give men multiple, explosively messy orgasms, daily.

Changed explosive to explosively, added messy

[IsabellaRose]

She legally must always give twenty people multiple, explosively messy orgasms, daily.

added twenty, changed men to people

[Venari99 Deactivated]

She legally must always give twenty people multiple, explosively messy orgasms, every day.

Added every, changed daily to day

[IsabellaRose]

She legally must simultaneously give twenty people multiple, explosively messy orgasms, every single day.

Added single, changed always to simultaneously (kind of bending the rules on that one)

[Venari99 Deactivated]

Every woman legally must simultaneously give twenty people multiple, explosively messy orgasms, every single day.

Added every, changed she to woman.

[IsabellaRose]

Every married woman legally must remotely give twenty people multiple, explosively messy orgasms, every single day.

 

Added married, changed simultaneously to remotely

[Nan-Yo]

Every married teen girl legally must remotely give twenty people multiple, explosively messy orgasms, every single day.

 

Added teen, changed woman to girl

[IsabellaRose]

Every unmarried teen girl legally must remotely give twenty people multiple, explosively messy orgasms, every single day forever.

 

Added forever, changed married to unmarried

[bumpnrun]

Almost every unmarried teen girl must wantonly give twenty people multiple, explosively messy orgasms, every single day forever.

Added Almost, changed remotely to wantonly

[IsabellaRose]

Almost every unmarried teen girl legally must wantonly give twenty foreign people multiple, explosively messy orgasms, every single Wednesday forever.

added foreign, changed day to Wednesday

[KillerQueen22]

Almost every unmarried preteen girl legally must wantonly give twenty foreign people multiple, explosively messy orgasms, every single Wednesday morning forever.

Added morning, changed teen to preteen

[IsabellaRose]

Almost every unmarried preteen female legally must wantonly give twenty horny foreign people multiple, explosively messy orgasms, every single Wednesday morning forever.

Changed girl to female, added horny

[bumpnrun]

On 01/11/2018 at 08:29, Mysthero said:

The end goal is to tell a story. You can theoretically end up with dozens of paragraphs if enough is added. What naughty story can we come up with as a group I wonder?

So how to we build a paragraph? Do we start by copying and pasting the previous sentence then add three new words and continue with the rules that were laid out? That would help to keep the sentence more coherent.