Senior Staff Aura Posted June 3, 2018 Senior Staff Posted June 3, 2018 Finally! Natia's profile is finished! I'll have to introduce her into the roleplay, soon, but I suppose I should first discuss who she'll be partnering with... anybody want to help or torture an innocent escaped slave girl?
Auxiliary Staff Neptune Posted June 3, 2018 Author Auxiliary Staff Posted June 3, 2018 The only character I have that can torture others like that is Devlyn, and he's further up north. Well, I suppose Yamura would as well, but she's with Devlyn. They will be making their way further south though but there's no telling how long that will be. Otherwise my other characters tend to be more helpful than nasty.
PinkKitten Posted June 3, 2018 Posted June 3, 2018 So...I think I'm done with my character profile. It's a bit hard to say since I worked on bits and pieces over time but I hope it's ok I'll try dumping Justine somewhere soon ^u^ 1
Kalvoras Vertal Banned Posted June 3, 2018 Posted June 3, 2018 "Would you mind if I took a look to help you determine? A second opinion, if you will"
PinkKitten Posted June 3, 2018 Posted June 3, 2018 Please do...I'm a bit worried XD But go for it and let me know! 1
Kalvoras Vertal Banned Posted June 3, 2018 Posted June 3, 2018 "Do you have it in Google Docs, or something else?"
PinkKitten Posted June 3, 2018 Posted June 3, 2018 Nope...I just wrote it straight in the description area Was I supposed to write it elsewhere?
Kalvoras Vertal Banned Posted June 3, 2018 Posted June 3, 2018 "Well, that's gonna be hard for me to help with XD" "Copy and paste what you have into a Doc and add me to it XD"
PinkKitten Posted June 3, 2018 Posted June 3, 2018 Here~ I added it to https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hn7kW_wJNXZxc3CUSlIRcGTvHcQPWIF9iKA0dOigeAk/edit?usp=sharing but a lot of the bolding and formatting didn't copy...
Auxiliary Staff Neptune Posted June 3, 2018 Author Auxiliary Staff Posted June 3, 2018 The ED text editor is a bit funny with formatting anyway. It would be a good idea to put it in a notepad, or notepad++ before putting it into the description of the image.
PinkKitten Posted June 3, 2018 Posted June 3, 2018 Does not know what notepad or notepad++ are Oh...Yeah, my computer doesn't have those lol...^-^" but I do often write drafts in an email which is ratchet and is also why I have 250 emails in my drafts folder now...
Kalvoras Vertal Banned Posted June 3, 2018 Posted June 3, 2018 (edited) "Yeah, it looks good to me ^_^ I would, if I didn't have Notepad, post it to the Sandbox to fix any formatting issues ^_^ At the bottom of the textbox (after pasting the text), it says "Paste as clean text", which you would click and then format it how you'd like ^_^" Edited June 3, 2018 by Shuya "Cheshire" Hideaki
PinkKitten Posted June 3, 2018 Posted June 3, 2018 Oh...Thanks ^-^" I didn't know that's what Sandbox is/is for. 1
Kalvoras Vertal Banned Posted June 3, 2018 Posted June 3, 2018 "Yup, the Sandbox is basically just for storing unfinished things or things that need to be worked on XD"
Auxiliary Staff Neptune Posted June 3, 2018 Author Auxiliary Staff Posted June 3, 2018 I have a question, @PinkKitten. You've put her origin as one of the towns, Lethulla but her nationality is put down as Southern France. Which would suggest that she's a citizen of France (Since nationality is basically the country you're citizen of. Although doesn't have to necessarily be where she was originally born). If she was born in Lethulla, that would make her a citizen of Craethiel. If her nationality is 'Southern France' or French as it would actually be, how did she obtain that citizenship? Or, if she was born in Southern France; how did she get to Craethiel? I didn't see anything regarding that in her bio. I suppose it doesn't help that I don't think I've stated what the nationality of someone would be if they were born in Craethiel. Craethian? Maybe pronounced "Creth-ian" Or better yet; Craetharian, pronounced "Craeth-a-rian". Mmm. I think I prefer that one xD
PinkKitten Posted June 3, 2018 Posted June 3, 2018 (edited) Yeah! So that's something that I got confused about and then totally forgot, haha...When I was stalking other people's profiles to try to figure out how to do this, I think I saw another profile where Nationality was written in as a real nationality, which was why I was unsure if I could do that. I mean, it's not really important; I just felt like I should say she was French to justify her having a French type of name, as well as Catharism being popular down in the south according to Wikipedia XD Better Craetharians than Cretins XD [Edit 1] Looking back on it, I think it was Aura's Natia profile, where she's European. Edited June 3, 2018 by PinkKitten
Auxiliary Staff Neptune Posted June 3, 2018 Author Auxiliary Staff Posted June 3, 2018 I think I will put it in the Character ID that if your character was born, and has lived in Craethiel, then their nationality would be Craetharian.
PinkKitten Posted June 3, 2018 Posted June 3, 2018 Alright! So just to confirm, is there even a Europe or anything Earth-related? If there is, then where is Craethiel approximately supposed to be?
Auxiliary Staff Neptune Posted June 3, 2018 Author Auxiliary Staff Posted June 3, 2018 That's a little complicated but doesn't actually affect the RP. But Lore-wise, Craethiel will go on to become Ashaea which is the location of my Blackberry Falls RP. But yes, there are all the Earth countries in this Universe although neither Temaelrin nor I have actually decided on a place for the island to be. But it's a reasonable climate with four seasons. A little similar to the UK however their winters are colder and they have more snow. We need to work on that xD
PinkKitten Posted June 3, 2018 Posted June 3, 2018 Ooh ok! So Craethiel is an unnamed island in the Europe area, but no one there should be Europeans? Should I change names? >_<"
Auxiliary Staff Neptune Posted June 3, 2018 Author Auxiliary Staff Posted June 3, 2018 We haven't actually decided where it was, so it might not even be near the Europe. Even if it was, it's not going to be part of the continent of Europe, which is what would be needed for citizens there to qualify as European's. But, this doesn't stop characters from immigrating or travelling to Craethiel via boat. It will take a while, yes, but it's still possible. Those characters would be able to quality as European, or wherever country they came from.
PinkKitten Posted June 3, 2018 Posted June 3, 2018 Alright! So does this work? XD I changed it so she was originally from southern France, but ditched to go to Craethiel because of persecution against Cathars.
Auxiliary Staff Neptune Posted June 3, 2018 Author Auxiliary Staff Posted June 3, 2018 That most certainly works. Pretty nicely, too. Seems to tie in well with what appears to be a bit of turmoil in regards to her religion.
Senior Staff Aura Posted June 3, 2018 Senior Staff Posted June 3, 2018 1 hour ago, PinkKitten said: Nope...I just wrote it straight in the description area Was I supposed to write it elsewhere? Take it from my personal nightmare of an experience, this is a terrible idea! I've had all kinds of issues when developing Sophia's profile in Blackberry Falls where I had to basically rewrite the entire thing because it bugged out on me near the end. I'm pretty sure her original bio was about twice as detailed as the one she has now. >.< I strongly suggest writing your bios in a document first and then pasting them over. It also allows you to save them as WIP's so you can work on them over time!
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