Senior Staff Aura Posted December 29, 2017 Senior Staff Posted December 29, 2017 You know, I had an idea while writing this post. I think it could be interesting if I made Sophia's little sister, Ariana, an angel who gets kidnapped by a demon and brainwashed or transformed into some sort of dark angel. She might could be a whole separate character. I would imagine her being dragged to hell by some demon she went to stop and just being the symbol of purity until she is completely corrupted through torture and manipulation. 1
Auxiliary Staff Neptune Posted December 29, 2017 Author Auxiliary Staff Posted December 29, 2017 Oh dude that is dark, and twisted as all hell... I love it xD Things is, Diomedes isn't completely evil. He's morally ambiguous... more chaotic good. Well. To his friends he's good. To his enemies he's one of the greatest forces in the Universe that will stop at nothing until you're brought down. I do know that after all is said and done with this side story, he's probably going to feel very bad. But he's just so angry (Which for his species, due to the inability to break down lactic acid, causes their high functions to deteriorate and see everyone as the enemy), and that spell Kelania put on him has brought out his deep dark desires which are, well... dark to say the least. 1
Senior Staff Aura Posted December 29, 2017 Senior Staff Posted December 29, 2017 Yeah, I understand that about him. I wasn't thinking of him, more so some other demon(s). It would probably be unrelated to Sophia and Diomedes' interaction, though it could possibly be related to Sophia and Kelania.
Auxiliary Staff Neptune Posted December 29, 2017 Author Auxiliary Staff Posted December 29, 2017 That plot I had in mind? I was thinking that one of the things Diomedes finds on Kelania's phone was a picture of Sophia that she sent to several numbers. Basically informing them on her victim and intend to proceed. Which means because the portal didn't open they might try and track Sophia down. Maybe they can use her sister as their tool, to find her? 1
Auxiliary Staff Neptune Posted January 3, 2018 Author Auxiliary Staff Posted January 3, 2018 Sorry my post is a little on the short side. It's a bit of a connecter. But at least it's something :D 1
Senior Staff Aura Posted January 5, 2018 Senior Staff Posted January 5, 2018 Don't sell yourself short! Your posts are incredible! 1
Auxiliary Staff Neptune Posted January 5, 2018 Author Auxiliary Staff Posted January 5, 2018 Thanks. I just find it frustrating if I can't find a way to make them longer if they're a little on the short side. But, you know the saying; Quality over Quantity. 1
Senior Staff Aura Posted January 5, 2018 Senior Staff Posted January 5, 2018 Sometimes less is more! I'd rather a short post than one filled with thirty adjectives describing how hard his dick is. Besides, it's only natural that Sophia's posts would be longer since there's so much going through her head at the moment. Sex isn't much different from an action scene. You have to give the other person an opportunity to respond to every action, so shorter posts are pretty much inevitable. If you're still looking for ways to expand your post length, perhaps you could have Diomedes use more of his abilities? Maybe he could look into Sophie's mind and use information from her past against her, like her history of chatting with strangers online, or maybe even a twinge of erotic thrill when she was kidnapped? Sophia pretty much has the very definition of a weak mind, so it would be an open book for him. 1
Auxiliary Staff Neptune Posted January 10, 2018 Author Auxiliary Staff Posted January 10, 2018 I missed this post of yours, otherwise I would have done something in my previous post. But since I have your permission, I think I shall do that. And bring the memories to the forefront of her mind so she can't exactly deny it, either lol 1
Senior Staff Aura Posted January 10, 2018 Senior Staff Posted January 10, 2018 Can't wait to respond! I'll try to get to that later today! 1
Senior Staff Aura Posted January 15, 2018 Senior Staff Posted January 15, 2018 You know, all of this talk of "that side" of Sophia makes me think it would be really interesting for her to develop a split personality over time. Perhaps that part of her would grow to be quite a threat. If I ever made Ari an angel as well, it would be interesting if Sophia had a personality that was a self-proclaimed 'demon'. I might want to expand on Sophia's ID page... 1
Auxiliary Staff Neptune Posted January 15, 2018 Author Auxiliary Staff Posted January 15, 2018 That would indeed be very interesting, especially if those two conflict with each other. Angel versus Demon. That's always a classic :D 1
Senior Staff Aura Posted January 15, 2018 Senior Staff Posted January 15, 2018 Maybe she could research magic or something to make herself more of an offensive threat as well. I like the idea of her becoming an enemy of angels and even corrupting many of them, but hiding behind her innocent personality in order to gain the support of her friends. I'm excited by this idea! I'll probably get to work on updating her character after a bit of time back in the main thread after the side story is completed. 1
Auxiliary Staff Neptune Posted January 15, 2018 Author Auxiliary Staff Posted January 15, 2018 Oh man that's pretty dark xD The "Who? Me?" person who stands with an innocent smile while holding a bloody blade behind her back. 1
Auxiliary Staff Neptune Posted January 26, 2018 Author Auxiliary Staff Posted January 26, 2018 I've finally posted an intro post for Kaylaen. I'm hoping there will be a character that comes along that will help Kaylaen realise his dream of owning his own restaurant but he's completely open to other interactions. His profile for reference. 1
Angela Daring Posted January 27, 2018 Posted January 27, 2018 (edited) I'm considering joining this RP, since one paragraph per post is more than within my means. Since prostitution is legal in Blackberry Falls, has there been any brothels created for the RP? I looked through the lore, and I couldn't find anything for it other than maybe Promiscuous Palace (if I'm spelling that right), but there weren't any details on that place. Also, I'm going to want to talk to someone about the backstory of the character I'm planning to use. She's a bunny girl, but she wasn't born one, instead being created by a mage in an attempt to subdue an angel. Though I guess I can just write all that stuff as having happened before she moved to Blackberry Falls. Thought the question is whether a bunnygirl would be allowed to move in to Blackberry Falls. Edited January 27, 2018 by Angela Daring 1
Senior Staff Aura Posted January 27, 2018 Senior Staff Posted January 27, 2018 (edited) 34 minutes ago, Angela Daring said: I'm considering joining this RP, since one paragraph per post is more than within my means. Since prostitution is legal in Blackberry Falls, has there been any brothels created for the RP? I looked through the lore, and I couldn't find anything for it other than maybe Promiscuous Palace (if I'm spelling that right), but there weren't any details on that place. Also, I'm going to want to talk to someone about the backstory of the character I'm planning to use. She's a bunny girl, but she wasn't born one, instead being created by a mage in an attempt to subdue an angel. Though I guess I can just write all that stuff as having happened before she moved to Blackberry Falls. Thought the question is whether a bunnygirl would be allowed to move in to Blackberry Falls. Well, you might want to go ahead and create your character now before asking if anyone wants to roleplay with her. Most people would probably want to know what kind of person she is so that they would have an idea with how their characters would interact with her. I'm not the creator of the club, but I'm pretty sure there shouldn't be any problems with a Bunny girl being allowed into the city. Or at least, no more than any other character, but you should probably wait for a response from @Neptune to be safe. But I would strongly recommend joining the RP! It's my favorite on the site ^^ Edited January 27, 2018 by Aurafox1 1 1
Angela Daring Posted January 28, 2018 Posted January 28, 2018 Sounds great! Though I'm going to have a bit of a problem putting down all of her turn ons and turn offs because I don't even know all of my turn ons/offs. xD 1
Senior Staff Aura Posted January 28, 2018 Senior Staff Posted January 28, 2018 Hehe well, you can always go back to expand on it any time you like, I'm planning on expanding Sophia's a bit to accomodate for more recent events and how they've affected her personality. So just fill it with whatever comes to mind for now ^^ 1 1
Angela Daring Posted January 28, 2018 Posted January 28, 2018 Anyway, I wasn't asking for people to roleplay with. Since my character was created and not born, she doesn't have a plethora of marketable skills. So, considering what she was designed for, I was going to have her become a prostitute, but I couldn't tell if there are any brothels established in the story or not, and I was asking about that. Something I need to know about before I create my character. 1
Auxiliary Staff Neptune Posted January 28, 2018 Author Auxiliary Staff Posted January 28, 2018 Heya Angela! Aura's quite right; there would be no problem with a bunny girl moving to Blackberry Falls. They would only prevent her if she has a Criminal history (Although for things like prostitution and such they might look over that since it's legal to them). But it's a city more concerned with meritocracy. There are currently no brothels established in the story at the moment, other than perhaps NPC ones. There used to be one, years ago, but due to lack of interest I stopped bothering with it. One would advise completely against going around the Promiscuous Palace. It isn't a brothel. That's the home of one of my characters, Diomedes, and he is protecting the property because there's something nasty hidden inside that will cause a lot of problems if it got out. But it didn't use to be like that, it was called that because it was owned by Tripp who is very well known for being promiscuous. Although the property is on UFFian land so inaccessible without crossing the border. 1
Angela Daring Posted January 28, 2018 Posted January 28, 2018 I'm going to have to come up with something else, then. That's fine, I can use one of Keiko's variants, then. Thanks, Neptune! 1
Senior Staff Aura Posted January 28, 2018 Senior Staff Posted January 28, 2018 There doesn't have to be an established brothel, you can simply have one run by an NPC. For example, Sophia works with an NPC-controlled troupe of street performers as well as singing at various unspecified pubs. If you want your character to work at a brothel, you can go ahead and make one up as if it's always been there, just so long as it makes sense. I plan to have Sophia end up working for a brothel eventually. 2
Auxiliary Staff Neptune Posted January 28, 2018 Author Auxiliary Staff Posted January 28, 2018 And there's nothing stopping you from establishing one outright. 1 1
Angela Daring Posted January 28, 2018 Posted January 28, 2018 (edited) Well, that works, too, then. I didn't want to have Keiko work in a brothel if she would be the only one there (no PC workers or customers) but having at least one other PC there makes me feel a bit more confident, and it'll be easier for Sophia to join a brothel later on if there's one established by then. Keiko's too submissive to start her own brothel, though. But I guess I could include Angela in this and have her run the joint. In that case, I should have Angela join the town first. She can decide to start her own business, look around town, see that there are no brothels despite prostitution being legal and fill a need. Edited January 28, 2018 by Angela Daring 1
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